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@42

Some stomachaches are more welcome than others and those from lemon pie are of that variety. Lucius's gift was so thoughtful and wonderful. I am surprised Hermione didn't use the L word in that situation. Now that I think on it, has she told Lucius that she loves him? I may just be experiencing a brain fart (entirely possible given the week I've had), but I don't think she has. Kind of unexpected that Lucius is the first one to go there, even if it IS while being sucked off, lol.

And he sure knows how to take a lady's mind off things! Hermione's martyr act was amusing and I liked Lucius's sternness. Very sexy and enjoyable. On to the next chapter...

wow that was awsome ... please please update soon ... later for now

angel

@43

Hm, so Uncle Malfoy had a conscience after all. I didn't see Nesbitt coming but it makes sense. Hermione was very sly, letting him do the 'villain thing' of laying out his entire plan and confessing everything before she pulled her second wand. Well done witch!

I have a feeling Lucius will be simultaneously amused and turned on by Hermione's conquest of Nesbitt. I'm glad I'm reviewing late because now I won't have to wait for what happens next!

Yay, another chapter! Just when you think that maybe they've solved the problem, another spanner gets thrown into the works. Loved it, can't wait to read what happens next!

Love it, love it, love it! Your plots are intricate and fascinating. And I really don't care where the Veil sent Nesbitt--he deserved worse. Now, will they be sent back to an altered future or is Lucius about to become his own grandfather?

Ahh...I haven't left a review for a little while, but I decided that I would break that horrid habit. I have been following this story since the first, but I'm afraid I haven't been faithful enough to review. Each night, I always check (though I know that you have a few days between each update ^_^), and every time I see the chapter number go up, I grab my poodle in one arm, my computer in the other, and sit down for a bit of good reading. I love the Lumione genre, and more importantly, I love you. I have read all of your works, and have thoroughly enjoyed all of them. I myself find that when writing, my talents lie in the Dramione category, but I have been known to dabble in Lucissa as well. (All of those combined name category things confuse me....)

You reviewed an old story of mine: The Malfoy Chronicles. I know that you are a very busy author, but it would honor me if you would look at one of my Dramione stories. My favorite is Upside Down. I'll be starting a new one as well, if you'll look out for it. It brings back James (my little dragon boy from The Malfoy Chronicles) and also throws in two major plotlines.

Well, enough rambling about myself. I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed as faithfully as others, but I promise that throughout the rest of this story, I'll drop you a nice review. Hope that we see an update soon.

Luv, DragonFyre

i think you did really well with the chapter! it is really hard to write time fics espically when you have to do the 'what ifs' and the 'possible' can be very confusing. i totally got it so now worries. loved the ending comment in authors note! :) really made me laugh! :) she really is and does lucius good he would have a hard time without her. well what is up next for our slowly maturing loving couple? :)

@44

I love that Lucius and Hermione are just calmly eating dinner while Nesbitt is tied up. I can totally picture that.

I'm a little nervous about their idea with the Veil. I want them to figure out a way to make Nesbitt take the fall. But perhaps the Veil will figure it out for them.

The mention of them returning to their own time makes me a bit nervous; they are so happy here and things won't be the same when they go back, if they can. :(

Very intricate but explains alot. I loved it.
Hmm will Lucius and Hermione be taking a closer look at their relationship now??
Will the Veil send them back to their own time after it has been apeased??

um yes this was a complex chapter, but i think everybody who read the books can follow it easily. and i think it is brilliant that you considered the books in your fic.