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Ah so the Voldemort Family Tree becomes part of the tale. Shame on Lucius for keeping secrets. Its always complicated when one is writing about time travel, trying to figure out just how much the actions of the persons going back will change the future. The whole space and time thing just gets confusing eh? Im not much into physics personally so it just gives me a headache to think on it too much =)


So, the question is...have they altered what took place before they leapt through the veil and are things back to rights in their time...more to the point, will they go back or are they content to live out their lives in relative peace in their current time? Wouldnt it be ironic for one of their children to be a squib? Ah the questions......=)


Happy Writing!
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Wow - complex is dead on. I follow but I really thought the Master was a canon character. Witchy holding her tongue. Now, should they stay or go? Will the Veil entice them back through to send them back to their future to see the changes they have wrought? And, will they lose each other on the journey? Oh you evil bibliophile, more questions than answers!

Ch. 45

That was brilliant! Your explanation of who the Master was and why he

Oh my lord, LaBib, I am so far behind. I have been enduring the fortnight from hell with school and work. Once I am through the next five days, I promise I will read and review all the chapters I'm missing. I'm sure they're great, anyhow, so I can say in advance: Good job!

If the Malfoy heirs are expected, what happens when the REAL ones show up?

ch 44 - drat! I wanted to see the git get handed over to his victims. well, perhaps the Veil has an even more "appropriate" punishment for Nesbitt. turn him into a Squib or a Muggle? nah, that's too easy; he'd just be a mean Muggle and still terrorize people. thanks for the new chapter, and for keeping our fave couple safe!

@44 If the veil is working for the good of society it should kill the lawyer.

Another very good chapter. I like Hermione's body letting her know it's alright to find Lucius attractive. Thinking of him with red hair though was quite funny. Off to read your next...

Oh, this was so funny! Hermione spanking Lucius? Oh, if she balks, please allow me to offer my services! LOL.

What an interesting progression of feelings between them! That trip to Diagon Alley will be interesting to be sure!