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Lovely chapter LaBib!
I think I could even go for a third helping of lemon pie...well perhaps it's best to save some for a different day. Otherwise the plot might start to intrude upon the lemons more than it did.

I wonder what it is that Hermione is forgetting.

That was really hot. I quite enjoyed the lemon pie. And I'm looking forward to the mystery.

I would like a little less lemon and some more plot.
Don't get me wrong, I like lemons, I'll just like
more plot than lemons in storries (70% plot 30% lemon), please?

no my stomach is fiin in fact i could of had a bigger piece. ;) well that was wonderfully sweet of lucius to gift her with the undergarments! :) i know our hermione would not be left out for long you (well him, rather) would not do that. :) i will be wait for the next chapter to see what you have planned next!

Delicious! Simply delicious! My lacy knickers (not black ;-D) are definitly soaked... I guess that's what you had in mind for your readers???

As for the mystery: I like the mix!

That whole scenario of Pansy and Hermione exchanging secret hexes was funny as hell! I had some girls in high school I would have loved to do that to. With Hermione, I see that revenge is a dish best served cold (I mean she did wait three days before exacting her revenge)!

Whew! You had me worried there. When Hermione showed up in be dressed in her 'granny' nightgown, I thought the prudish Hermione had reared her ugly head and we were about to return to 'restrictive sex'...i.e. nighttime only, missionary (and forget about pegging or anal sex...that's simply not done!) I'm so glad that it was just a brief stint of Hermione's old insecurities coming to the fore.

As for the abudance of lemon pie, I have no tummy ache. It was soothed ever so well by lovely Lucius' presents. So please feel free to dish up the lemons as often and in as large quantities as you like.

Looking forward to reading about Hermione's 'gossip session' at her breakfast with the bitches...er ladies!
MHS

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

The answer to life, the universe and everything!

Oooooh! Hermione with Slytherin tendencies! yay!

Knickers! With FLOWERS! Wooohoooooo!

Is the prophet in circulation yet? Are there portraits on the front page? Line drawings? The camera's not even a twinkling in it's inventor's eye at this time!

Granny nightie? All tied up at the neck? Eh?

Ooooh, speechless AGAIN!

Hmmm.. not as good as when Lucius was getting it, but I still enjoyed it. I was going to say that I am getting sick of lemon pie... but I don't think there will ever come a day! :)

Woo-HOO! Nicely done. Still, one question: Are they going to be running into Sirius, or is Sirius dead or in another part of time for the Veil? I can't really see him being a blackmailer, despite his Dark family connections. By the by, I may be wrong, but shouldn't Phineas Nigellus be Headmaster at this point?