rate_review Reviews

Well i've finally finished it and it took me 3 days of near constant reading aside from the regular interruptions of a wife and mother... Any way I really enjoyed this story thank you for a wonderful read and a truly believable plot to get Hermione and Lucius together.

Honestly,the thought of Lucius looking less than immaculate still makes me laugh... Oh,what *did* Hermione call him behind his back? hehehe This is fun...I think His Loftiness makes a great historical character... Something out of a Georgette Heyer novel...

Well,I hope they get some breakfast soon before they get any crankier... *giggle*

This promises to be really thrilling...it makes a change to see Lucius portrayed as a warrior rather than a politician/financier...

Hmm...stepping in 'bovine excrement' would certainly make their day... I wonder where they are...can't wait to find out... Lucius is such a gentleman,but only he could manage to be immaculately dressed under such circumstances...

Wow, I come back from my self-imposed break to focus on school and it's completed! =) I was wondering if they were going to go back to their time and they did. I'm a little surprised they went eight years ahead in the future, but I guess it makes sense. I find it a bit amusing that Astoria is comparing herself to Hermione and self-conscious about her looking older than Hermione. I was slightly surprised that Hermione is pregnant again...that is a lot of kids...but as long as they like it...great work and can't wait to read your next fic. =)

By the way, I just had to tell you--I love the avatar you use on here; it just makes me laugh!

I was finally able to sit down and finish this wonderfully hot story! I didn't think I would ever finish it. Every time I went to sit down I got called away and never got back to it. I want to comment on specific things but my brain is a little muddled right now to think of some stuff. Of course I love the kinky sex, is there anything hotter then a riding crop and Lucius or the sexy wizard on all fours giving up control to Hermione?? LOL Great job and I can't wait till your next story, which I will be reading as you post it. I hope :)

i'm a bit behind the curve with this tale -- i've had a couple of weeks off from the grueling horrors that are graduate school, so i'm catching up with my lumione fan fic -- but i just have to say that this story is WONDERFUL. i've read a few of your one-shots, which are also great, but this.... the perfect balance of smut and plot, with an amazing dose of humor as well. you have such a good sense of tone, i do have to say -- lucius and hermione just seem spot-on to me, and i adore reading the banter and exchange between the two. just as a note, though, i love how you utilize the veil and really create a whole universe around it. the time travel, the slightly fantastical elements of the tale... all of these are absolutely perfect, and lend a very literary bent to an excellent story. i read the entire thing in about 2 days, but i have to say, the bits with the cow at the beginning, along with the use of the 'wizard of oz,' were absolutely priceless moments. brava, and i look forward (quite eagerly!) to the next tale.

This was simply splendid. The imagery you painted was both masterful and amazing. I felt, as I have so much in this story, that I've been right there in the room with them. Brilliant!