rate_review Reviews

I went to your LiveJournal and *squee!* It's amazing. I tip my hat to you.

Love this chapter! It made my heart sing--Snape obviously cares about Harry, even if he tries to pretend otherwise. It was cute enough to make me squee! I thought for sure that Snape was about to join Harry in beating the shite out of Avery. Avery gives me the creeps, by the way... And I think the Imperio curse can last for a great deal longer than a week... But in this story it's different. Ok. I can accept that. I really enjoy reading this story.
By really weird in some parts, I just mean that some parts seem awkward-not in your writing style, but just in the situations that take place. I'm really easily embaressed for characters, so I felt really oddly when Harry was having the mini identity crisis. What's up with training naked? I have to say, it doesn't sound comfortable AT ALL. Nope. :)
But anyway, I look forward to your next chapter, and I hope Avery doesn't get to lay a single slimy hand on Harry! He's property of Snape! Although...when he eventually escapes, it's going to be REALLY awkward with Ginny...

ooo! please continue! your story kept me awake all night and now ive nothing to do...

Very smart. Let us see whether or not their plan worked....More please!

NO! That was the biggest cliffie of the century! Amazing writing, I love the story, I can't wait to read the rest of it. Some of it comes off as really weird, but I've gotten past it and it's awesome. I hated Snape before this story, but I think I actually like him now. Anyway, good luck with the story! I've got to go make dinner! Byes!

Eeeee! Cliffhanger!

Chapter 26

NOOOO! YOU DID NOT JUST LEAVE IT OFF LIKE THAT!!! AHHHH!!!!!

Omg, i think i'm seriously going to die....yup...there went my heart...i'm dead...you and your demonic cliffy killed me...

*is dead*

i love your ff! every chapter is better than the last one and i hope for a soon update! i want to know what will happen with harry!!

I waited until I got to the last chapter before reviewing and now I'm DYING for more. I can't stand not knowing what Avery will put poor Harry through, and I love how Harry is starting to feel something for snape but can't tell, and Snape, when Harry's licking his fingers snaps at him to stop was so cute. I hope you have lots of time on your hands because I don't think I could handle it if you didn't update this. Good job on this great story :)