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Well you  didn't do another one after you Said you weren't sure whether you keep it up I thought you get at least one more chapter in

Crystal clear now, sweetie!!

ooooh... teachers behaving like students and snogging in the corridors!!! Can't go wrong with that!

You know, I always imagined some Mrs. Norris/Crookshanks kittens... what a set of moggies they'd be!

This is just a great story, I hope you keep it up. I love the deviousness of the kids, they remind me of me in my younger days!

Hi MarriedtoaSnapeclone,
I just read the first two chapters of your story,and I must confess I just love it.I didn't like the epilogue of DH at all.I love the idea that you took the courage to rewrite a new one.I hope that the 4 cousins can overcome the hatred between the houses.
Do you intend on writing about their whole school-life in Hogwarts?
I just have a slight problem with the given name of T(obias).I know that it is a tradition to name the children after the grand-parents,but I doubt that Severus (who hated his father ) would name his son after such a cruel man.(but maybe his great-grand-father or so wa a better man,and he named him after this one.)I cannot wait to read more.Lol Sureves Epans

Awww. A nice take on the next generation; but this is going to give Hogwarts a run for its money!! So, we have a little Snape, a little Ginny, a little Neville and a little Ron?... now that's trouble with a capital T! But we also have the next Malfoy, and a girl at that!

One request - can you put a line between each new speaker, its a nightmare to follow the conversations at the moment. When you go to edit, pressing return won't work now it's posted, its a HTML code(and I think its
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9/10 for chapter 1, it would be 10/10 with lines between.

I went back to check and realised the code was missing! lol! its < br >, without the spaces - I think.

Gotta love technology, it doesn't like me! lol!

xxx

I like it. Please update soon.