schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What I particularly like about this story is the fact that you don't lose yourself completely in the erotica you so skillfully compose, but that there's still a plot. I'm absolutely enthralled. There you have it. *grins*
schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly sensual and beautiful. And at the same time you can see the relationship between them develop; they are both fully fleshed out characters, and you work wonders making them "real". Marvelously done.
schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well... they re both right, this won't be easy. Pondering the list of Hermione's thoughts, it might be downright impossible. But a stubborn little voice in the back of my head refuses to give up on them, or on what they might perhaps have. *turns eagerly to the next chapter*
schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Ego solvo vos"? Yes, of course. If there ever was a proof - if we ever needed one after the slow, sure pace you made those to fall for each other. My goodness, how beautiful. And how sad.
schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How appropriate that it should be Harry who is capable of understandig what made her break up with Ron... and yes, finding a true aim for her life, realizing what it really is that she wants to do must be incredibly liberating. And whatever will happen next - carpe diem. They simply have to. *smiles*
schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the thought that Draco should try to fix the inner damages he must sense in his father, as he feels them within himself. A fascinating - and absolutely canon-possible - way how he might have turned out to be as a grownup man. (I'm reading this since noon this day, btw. and now it's midnight. I had to control the homework of my kids between chapters, fix dinner and get them to bed - too late because I was unable to get away from the latest installment I was just reading. Too bad that I have to go to bed soon. *smiles*).
schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* I know why Hermione felt that uneasy lying at Harry; I had the same, painful feeling in my stomach. And what is that with the murder of Lucius' publisher? Why do they think it was him? Okay... bed can wait. *wipes brow nervously*
schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My goodness. Those details about Lucius' first stay in Azkaban were truly nasty. *swears under her breath* I'm indefinitely glad for Tiberias (whom I like very much, btw.), for that lawyer and for Shacklebolt's attempt to do the right thing, his distrust notwithstanding. And I think Harry and Ron are very close to the truth... for heaven's sake, it's about time. (Oh... I wanted to ask this for some chapters already: to whom is Sinistra married? McGonagall?)
schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The last sentence made me smile. And I want to tell you once again - I did months ago, when I first discovered this tale on SH, I think - how chilling and at the same time wonderful the excerpts of the book are. You not only give me this thrilling tale, but also a deeply disturbing, unsettling and brilliant book within the tale. *bows before you*
schedule
June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*curses softly under her breath* Ah, the sins of our youth... though marking Marietta was not really a sin, wasn't it? And it had to come out somehow; it can't be good to let Harry in the dark. Now all I can hope is that he at least tries to understand.