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Oh FBS, first of all - congratulations to that piece of fine, fine smut.:-))) And now tell me, is there really a man able to give us that kind of sex? Who is that hot, sensitiv and thoughtful? Cause, in all my 32 years I haven't found him. Sob.... Where is he, and where have you hidden Lucius? In your closet? You selfish b.....!
Once again, a fantastic chappy. Although I'm a bit disappointed that Lucius has only used two rubbers. I was equipped for a good comical scene. But of course a sweaty bed battle involving Lucius is a real treat.
So darling, hurry back to the desk and update us on what will be going on between them.
LOL, Alex

My goodness that was beautifully erotic and just...wow. Thanks for the update! *fans self*

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan they SHAGGED YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!...lol

**Takes deep soothing breath and composes self....he he.

That was an awesome chappie! In every chapter you surpass yourself and once again show what a talent you are! I so love how you wrote their first time together. They didn't just have sex...they made love! Too many fics include 'fucking' and not enough 'making love' even your smut is romantic and with a purpose aside from getting off...Lucius and Hermione have this weird emotional connection which strengthens the physicality between them and it flows nicely as you write it!

Please please update soon I want to know what happens next....and of course I want to find out how Lucius contracted HIV...mind you you might've already aluded to how but I'm realy thick and can't pick up on such subtleties...LOL!

Well done girlie! (You are a chick right? He he)

Oh. My. God. I can't even say anything else until I go take a cold shower. Then I'll read it again! LMAO!

That warning was needed, indeed!

I loved that little foreplay/sex-ed session - not one bit awkward, and this made me crack up: "So did watching him use every spell short of Fiendfyre on the condom to make sure the Unbreakable Charm worked."

Oh, somebody who can draw make a picture of Draco flinging Spaghetti Bolognese at Lucius!

AV, a lovely chapter! One thing: I think you mean 'reins' instead of 'reigns', early on in the chapter. Very beautiful evolution of their relationship. Thanks so much for updating! Oh, and my husband thinks she may actually be a distant relative. He tends to periodically Google our last name (his, actually). :D

"A Farewell to Arms!" I knew what book you were talking about, but I couldn't remember the title. I think I repressed it out of spite; I love an unhappy ending, but that one just pissed me off. There are good unhappy endings that leave you thinking, and then there are unhappy endings that seem as though they've been written just for the sake of being miserable.

*fans herself* Well, that was quite the evening. It's great to see that Lucius is willing - eager, even - to be extra safe for Hermione's sake, even though the illness is incredibly rare in wizardkind.

You've really got a talent for description, and everyone is beyond in character. JKR creates a good story, but her characters are dreadfully one-sided, something you easily remedy.

This chapter was amazing, FBS. You really delivered! You never ever disappoint, never. I loved Hermione's slight at the end with the muse comment. God, you are such a fantastic writer, so very well written, I loved it!

Your going to kill me! My goodness that was a lovely read. You ability to convey such deep sensuality blows my mind. I love your characters and I can't wait to see what you do with them in the coming chapters. Beautiful. :)

Very good!! I liked that one. Keep up the great work, I am more than happy to wait longer if it means you keep giving us great quality chapters.