rate_review Reviews

Wow....just...gah......very well written.

fuck that was hot! I definitely look forward to more updates like that! *fans self*

Not only it was hot it was also educational. I had no idea what a Dragon

Colour me surprised! The saying is true "It's always the quiet ones". Good job springing Arthur in there. I would have figured Molly or even Percy but not Arthur. Keep the chapters coming!

So Harry's own darkness protects him from Voldie's and Hermione and Draco are falling under that shield as well. I wonder what Calixa would say to that...I'm starting to wonder about her, where will she fit in all of this at the end. That's so cute Hermione telling them that the sexual tension is so tight she could hang bras from it. I hope they will be getting over that tension soon : )

Sooo need chapter 26!!! He's planning to end this in 2 wks? But how?

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY KINKY SEX!!!!

More?

Oh. My. God. YES!!! That was so delicious! That was like the most erotic, beautiful, and dare I say romantically depicted S&M scene I've read in fan fiction! I kid you not. You really put your foot into that. I'm aroused and I have no one here to whip me :( That was just really really....god, thank you. What did I like about it? Draco's acquiescence and need for the lash, his silent appreciation, Harry knowing how to push him just past the point where he thought he couldn't take it anymore and Harry and Draco's understanding that in order for it to be perfect Harry had to take everything from him....The fact that Harry seems to just know naturally how to satisfy his and his slave's needs with no prior experience with sex just makes this more organic and powerful. It was very tastefully done and beautiful in the way you described it. Usually when people describe whipping scenes, they don't make the whip an extension of the person...you did and I felt like it was just another way for these two to make love. Awesome job!

Harry is kind of scary sometimes. I can't even imagine what he's going to do next.
I loved the lemon. For someone inexperienced as Harry, he did really great.
Thank you.

Very beautifully written.