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Excellent. I hope that Hermione and Severus will be able to stay married to keep Lucius from taking her away. I can't wait to read the next chapter soon.

I like it. Please update soon.

Okay so on one hand I'm totally happy for Hermione and Severus cause they've discovered their love for one another and admitted it to the other. But on the other hand, I'm totally nervous and freaking out cause Lucius has been known to cause many a problem and now he's focused all his energy on making problems for Hermione and Severus....there's only one way to alleviate my panic and I think you know what that is. Update again SOON! lol Great update, I can't wait for more!

I love it! I wonder what nasty Lucius has up his sleeve...

Got it! I think its the slight Americanisms and their wording that's nagging at me. As a Brit they tend to get up my nose a bit, but these are more subtle than other fics I've seen, which is probably why its taken a while for me to spot them.

Great story can't wait to read more...

Nice story, keep going!

This has a very promising plot and you're starting to develop the characters nicely and morph them into your own specifications.

My only comment is a gut feeling I'm getting, I can't quite put my finger on it - something seems a little bit odd plot-wise... Nothing major, just something nagging at me. I'll go back in a day or so and read again and see if I can find what it is. Maybe its because you use a writing style that is a careful blend of formal and informal at once? And I'm not used to that??

Apart from something nagging at me (one reader among a score of others, so its probably only my opinion! Don't worry!), this is very good! Keep going!

Excellent. I look forward to reading more to see what Lucius is planning and if they can both stay safe. I think that their love for each other is too strong to be torn apart.

I love it so far, I just wish the chapters were longer. :[ Update soon please!