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for The Mentor

by wishyouwere

schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hermione can still be a virgin and be a little wild there is nothing wrong with it. i was like that when i was a virgin i got a lot of ideas and moves from porno movies and fantsy of men i wanted.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hm i really prefered the virgin part. i lived 4 years with my ex without having sex (unbelieveable but shows your body knows better !!).
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had to take a cold shower after reading this last chapter;)
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:D I like this!
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! I was wondering when you were going to update! I like your build up and hope things ebd up al fluffy!....I'm in a romantic mood....LOL
person Nboulet
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Absolutely lovely. You're a good writer. And I became lost in the story. Reminds me briefly of another fanfic ... The Tutor.

Keep writing!!!
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job! Can't wait for the next chapter, and I love the new title. Update soon, please!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooohhhhh weeeeeeeee! Another chapter!

I like this fic and ca't wait to see where you take it. I wasn't having a go at you personally about the chapter length its just that I find the really good fics (Such as yours) are so good I want to read forever!

Anyway great work keep it up!
person goofball
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Promising start. I'm looking forward to read more of your story! :o)

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