rate_review Reviews

I really think that there are possibilities for the direction this fic is taking. I would like to offer you one piece of advice. Get yourself a beta reader if you can. Failing that, make sure you read through your work thoroughly before posting it. The 17+ spelling errors (not including grammatical ones) do make for stilted reading and prevents what could be a good fic from flowing nicely.
I wish you well for the next chapter & I will look forward to reading your next offering. I am in no way flaming but I think that if you want to grow as an author, constructive critique is a great tool at your disposal.
Blessings
Amethystique :-)x