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for The Downside Of Brilliance

by goofball

person MB3
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahaha. Oh this story was brilliant!! I really loved it. I can just imagine Hermione and Serverus getting distracted by something they are working on and forgetting everything else. And that last line about Severus imagining the Headmaster talking to him the next morning after seeing his eyes dark with circles and insinuating that he had spent the night immersed in carnal desire as opposed to getting distracted with a potion really had me rolling. Again, this was fabulous. I will definately keep an eye out for anything else you write. Keep up the good work!!
person DawnEB
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love it! Not only the way their intellect gets in the way of more carnal passions, but the idea that their late nights together are being misinterpreted :D Very nicely done
person Utopia
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He he! So Dumbledore thinks his potioneers (I think that should be a word) are at it like bunnies!

Such a shame they're too focussed on their work and interests to be passionate! But abstinence makes the heart go fonder - and when they do finally put everything in their minds on a back burner it will certainly be explosive! I guess its the curse of being with someone doing the same job, you take your work home with you!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute little oneshot.
person Pookah
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How realistic! Amusing because it is true to life.

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