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Sooo need chapter 10!!! What did Lucius cast? So even Ron wouldn't accept Harry's orientation?

I feel horrible as to not have been reviewing faithfully. That's remiss of me and I offer my humble apologies. However I still find myself irked at falling headlong into the chapter just to have it end with a cliff hanger that's about 40,000 feet above sea level. I should mention that I'm afraid of heights. And I fall for it everytime, what does that say about me? I get to the most interesting part of the chapter and it happens to be the end. How on Earth do you do it? It's obviously a talent you've perfected.

I'm up in the air as to who I like more. I, of course, love Draco but strangely enough, and more then a little blasphemus, I'm rooting for Brian. He reminds me in certain ways of Brian Kinney [of Queer as Folks]. He was actually the first person I thought about when I read the name. It's almost like I want Harry to stay/become Brian but that's absurb as I love Harry with Draco.

Was the spell that Lucius cast 'to make' Draco come to his heterosexual senses? I mean surely he wasn't trying to poison him. Oh, or maybe he was and in exchange for the counter curse he had to dump Brian and settle down with a nice, rich, pure-blood witch. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I'm can only speculate until you post the next chapter and leave me hanging from a terrifying height again.

Nikki
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com

lol @ lucius and salad. like a little kid. this story rocks!

Cliffhanger!
Lucius is REALLY shaken up by this; he is not his normal suave self.
I kinda feel for Narcissa... a little.
Great chapter!
update

OMG! I can't believe I haven't read this before! Just finished it in one go, you must update soon. I'm completely enthralled! The power play and calculations are incredible! Please have a happy ending for this one... I'm a bit concerned about Harry's mental health though. I can't be healthy to have that many personas and rolls to play...

these recent chapters have been so awesome. how many chapters are you anticipating the story to be, now that youre quite far into the story? also, when harry tries going out with men, hes true to himself, and doesnt use personas? because its so hard being harry, he hasnt gone out with that many men, as himself? when he has used other personas for his personal use, was he able to form solid friendships? (not as strong as his bond with hermione and ron, but close nonetheless). cant wait for your next update :)

Ch7
Well this sounds as if Harry pulling back a little is kindling Draco

Ohhhhh, god this is easily one of THE hottest fics I've read!!! Seriously, that kiss from Ch 4...TOTALLY SMOKIN!!!! Pictured it...yeah, it worked...and the sex...talk about being melted into a puddle!!! WOOOOOOOOO

I can't wait until Draco finds out it's Harry...but I know that's not till the end, and until then, I'm really enjoying the masks and personas Harry has created, and I'm really interested in the little differences between Brian and Harry...and how Brian might do one thing that Harry wouldn't do and which is better for Draco...

(and when I say "better for Draco", I don't mean "who he hired Harry to be"...I mean better for his heart in the long run (*cough* Harry *cough* ) even though Draco may not realize it yet...THAT's going to be a fun climax!)

Love ya! (and this story!) Can't wait!

Soo need chapter 9! That man actually threw a stone? A stone?! I soo agree with Brian. The fact that the child had to see her father commit such an act was worse then anything they could have done! Sooo need more!

What a fun chapter. I just like the thought of Draco and 'Brian' browsing for jewelry. Casually talking about everyday business while they examine fine gemstones. Its just such a colorful scene. I think that Harry just doesn't realize the fact that so many of these characters are centered around one basic trait of his real personality. One single trait, either dormant or dominant split off, and developed, and given a life story and a wardrobe. It may be why its so easy for him to slip in and out of character most times. Can't wait for this update,
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex