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Whooohoo ...another chapter, and a darn good one too.
So much suspense its killing me
...finally Fenrir is mentioned.
I like the way he thinks, love his character in this fic.
I cant wait for you to get to Fg/Hp.
...cant wait to read more.

If you'd like, I can keep my reviews short. I tend to give longer reviews because I kinda sum up the story with my comments on it as well. I really liked this chapter though because it was SO LONG! LOLz! Anywho... I liked that it was Remus comforting Harry and not Sirius. Mainly because I see Remus as softer and more caring than Sirius, although I can see Sirius as being there for Harry all the time. Don't get me wrong. But Remus is a submissive and can kinda understand where Harry is. Sirius is a Dominant and can speak to Severus, to a point, as another Dominant. Then Severus will get snippy and tell him to eff off because he's the Alpha and Sirius isn't. *sigh* Poor Harry. That dream scared the hell out of me though. And then Fenrir. Yeah! *cheering* *shouting* *much happiness all around* I was so happy to see him. Er, read about him actually, but you get my point. I like the Beta; seems like a playful sort to me. I half hope it's Evander that takes Harry before he can get to Tom Riddle, and I half hope it's Fenrir himself. I don't think it will be Fenrir, and I like the idea of Evander grabbing him. I can see Harry freaking out that after getting away from Snape and going to Riddle, he gets nabbed by Random Guy Q to be taken to Random Guy L. It's a great picture in my mind. I'm excited for what's about to unfurl. Keep it up, keep it going. ~dpa06~

Poor Harry he is having nightmares about Tom. So Fenrir is a rival pack. I wonder if all packs follow the same rules of are different. Can't wait till next chapter.

Yeah, I get your point, it would be boring without Fenrir! ^^ I actually thought that Harry's personality really shone through in this chapter, you could really feel his helplessness and frustration at his situation. I liked Sirius' and Remus' roles in this, as his guradians. I am very curious as to how you will portray Fenrir; you have a very unique style. I liked the momentum in this chapter, you had a good balance between thought and action. I hope you are recovered from you illness. It totally sucks being stuck in bed. :( Good luck with the next chapter!

It's OK that you didn't get it up, better for it to be good than posted earlier without it being good. Sorry to hear that you were sick, I hope your feeling better now!

As to this chapter, I liked it, although it was a little bit of a filler. However if it means that Harry has to be mated to Tom, then things should get real interesting real soon.

Looking forward to more,
~gorgeousbowneyes

I love that it's different and the direction it's heading. And Snape's an ass!!! but I love him.

Oh this is good

Hello again!
Surprisingly, Snape's personality fits. ^_^ But I feel sooo bad for Harry!
Fenrir needs to come save him from evil Tom!
Much Love
Dee

Oh wow! this fic is amazing! all the people are in character only they're all werewolves! ^^ Poor Harry....god snape is such a prick. Could we get some more background on Harry and the others? I feel like I walked into the middle of a lifelong play. Other than that I love the story and cant wait for Fenrir! Thanks for the chapter and update soon please!

I'm still hooked and glad to read another chapter.
Harry is such a drama princess...