rate_review Reviews

this is a really great one-shot :) the only way it could have been better was if the lovemaking was shown a bit more, all that anticipation and then it just cut off.

 

 This was a great story. I had tears in my eye for some of it. I love when you can get into a story and feel and relate whats happening.  I love the harry potter storys. And i think these two charactere's  should have been togather. I hope you write more stories like this.

thank you

Wwwhao the beginning was tense...i love the determination for her toward her husband:)

I enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing. W.

wow this was breath taking!

Very good story Scribbler; the way Hermione went through all those obstacles to get Harry back was heart warmimng. I cannot get enough of the way you make Harry and Hermione love each other so much that they would sacrifice themselves for each other. I also love the fact that you made Hermione have that very sensual side that only Harry can bring about. Please keep on writing amazing stories such as these I am still anxiously awaiting you to continue the Triangle Disease Remake please please continue it. Anyways thanks again and keep up the GREAT work!!

you did it again :) a great story :)

hope you keep up writing so good storys

greetings from germany


(btw. sorry for my bad english :) )