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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting...i look forward to more soon!!!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start....love to see where you're gonna take this...love the tension you've drawn. More please : )
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lounging with a feline grace that belied his brutish nature. With writing like that, I'm SO IN! Slaughter indeed! You've set them up so perfectly that it can't be anything but a bloodbath, but boy, I can't wait to be there for the bloodletting!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
need chapetr 2,this is too short for me to comment or give suggestion
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the summary of this story..so hot
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this looks INTERESTING! Please continue! I'm most intrigued.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very well written, I'm anticipating a very good story. let's see it.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it. The way you write really reminds me of JK. So many details, so little time. :) This story is gonna be fun. I can tell. Update soon!
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great start! I'm going to enjoy this story very much so. I think you write perfectly! Update soon please.
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing how you handle the year. ;D