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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
beautiful! *sniff*
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi neelix,your story is great
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been an amazing story, which has been written and presented wonderfully. I've really enjoyed it and thank you for sharing such a passionate and lovely romance. Snape is so amazingly dashing and sexy, and he made me ache and long to be in Hermione's place. Well done. Please update soon.
Kitty
Kitty
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok - so I will admit that I had no idea where Severus had gone. My head went immediately to the place of rogue Death Eaters or the possibility of a new Dark Lord. It is true, I am a victim of the fanfic cliches! This was a great chapter. Your lemons are full of lip puckering goodness! I love that there is almost a new chapter (or more) each day. Please keep writing and updating regularly. I cannot wait to see how this ends.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are quite wrong about this not being a good chapter. I really appreciate that youdont put lemon after lemon in there. It makes us readers realize that you really like your plot and so do I !!! *g
Kepp it coming ;)
Jocy
Kepp it coming ;)
Jocy
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Jocy... I really do care about the plot! I like lemons but not a massive fan of PWP... dont like mean Severus either... he's getting mushier by the second in my story!!!
Wishyouwerehere - thanks for your postive feedback, it really makes me happy!
Wishyouwerehere - thanks for your postive feedback, it really makes me happy!
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait for more.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^guh^ truely beautiful story. I love how you have got them to experience each others emotions towards each other, a true sign of their deep love for each other. Looking forward to the next update.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This ritual was awesome !!! Can i please get that for my one wedding some day? *g
i really loved it, but it made my heart cry to see that there are only 2 chapters left. Are you sure you dont want to write about children and so on? *G
Love your story. It is truly amazing!
Love
Jocy
i really loved it, but it made my heart cry to see that there are only 2 chapters left. Are you sure you dont want to write about children and so on? *G
Love your story. It is truly amazing!
Love
Jocy
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi all,
I could keep going forever with this I guess but then it would always be a WIP and I may lose heart!!!
I love Severus and Hermione, I love this story, But... I can't write about every time they end up in the sack!!!
So... two more chapters and an epilogue will tie it up!!
So glad you are still enjoying the story!! Thanks again everyone for the positive feedback.
I could keep going forever with this I guess but then it would always be a WIP and I may lose heart!!!
I love Severus and Hermione, I love this story, But... I can't write about every time they end up in the sack!!!
So... two more chapters and an epilogue will tie it up!!
So glad you are still enjoying the story!! Thanks again everyone for the positive feedback.