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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A good start. A little light on fill-in detail and descriptors, but hell, every single person reading this knows your characters, locations, motivations and circumstances well enough that you can focus on your storyline.
I look forward to more! Thanks for posting.
Cheers
CB
I look forward to more! Thanks for posting.
Cheers
CB
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! What a place to stop. Can't wait to read more!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should definately continue! i do so love it when they do back in time together :)
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Snape-Lover,
Difficult to see where this story will be leading to,but it very greatly intriging.I would like to see more.
Sureves Epans
Difficult to see where this story will be leading to,but it very greatly intriging.I would like to see more.
Sureves Epans
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow a very interesting beginnig. especially the end was very promising. Looking for more of this :)
Jocy
Jocy
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo this was a really good start i can't wait to find out what will happen next