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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
At long last, they were able to reveal their feelings for one another - lovely work!
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ending! If anyone deserves a happy ending, it's these two! Really lovely full circle and a feeling of 'rightness' & completion & being whole for both! Love your prosaic prose and dynamics & flow in your work - Keep writing!
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the slow progression of healing & observation from Sev, his awareness and slowly seeing Harry & his world differently. Intrigued about the many other memories of Severus' past!:)
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww... sweet & sad - poor Severus! Yes, now having to live in the post-Voldy war, a survivor, and the poignant loneliness & realisation of missing Harry's presence - well done! Lovely work!
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmm... nice flow of events; and the pain of seeing Harry with Ginny; he may have found seclusion, but not peace in his snug hideaway in Scotland - he's haunted by memories & feelings - they're not going to go away just because he changed location - poor Sev!
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the dynamics of this chapter - the shielded, defensive Sevberus and an assertive, determined Harry seeking the truth and refusing to be rejected/ignored! The ending - straight through the heart! great chapter!
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh,oh, oh - the dynamics and pace is really heating up! I meant to write something in the last review about Harry being a man, and not a boy, but Harry pointed that out just now - HA! Can really feel Sev's turmoil & self-denial - great chapter!
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October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it - love your detailed description and tone/atmosphere immediately captured. Reading on!
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October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's truly wonderful of what might/could have been. Love Severus' point of view/vulnerable & poignant observation and feelings, as well as Harry's remorse & new-founded awareness. Lovely work! (I'm having a hectic day, hope to catch up more with reading tomorrow evening)
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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you had me at this chapter! harry's sorrow is so sweet!