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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oohh so a confrontation with james and lily wow i like the way that you have them portrayed in this i mean a lot of times they are written as james being an ass and lily being sweet but this avenue is nice as well... so dumbledore has figured it out this should be interesting
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo now that was a passionate little snogging session... and way to go dumbledore... always a meddler
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow so she told lily but i think lily needed to understand that severus is beyond his feelings for her and that he is not trying to use hermione.. and way to go severus laying down the law for peter... why do i feel like peter is going to cause more trouble for them
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was definitely a hot chap.... i am so glad that severus is opening up to her it will be even harder for them when she has to leave...
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap i like the way you have written severus' mom.... i wonder what james and sirus are going to do about hermione she does know a lot...
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the way that you write their desire for each other i mean you can really feel it... great job
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo we got a little bit of foreplay... nice so severus sleeps naked...
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow his dad really is an ass... great chap... poor eileen
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really hot... severus is so sweet.. and irresistible
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aahhh this is going to be hard for them.... so we got to see the couple from anothers perspective