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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you are planning to write a little bit mnore to this story it sounds interesting. I like how it reads so far. Look Forward to maybe seeing more.
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that's some poorly written dialogue.
Re-read the HP books and compare to your own writing.
Re-read the HP books and compare to your own writing.