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for Senses Be Stricken

by freakenbree

person dino1
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I wonder if the headmaster hired the new teacher to purposely to push Severus and harry together? He to me almost to me feels like a predator with the way he is stalking Harry. I hope that Severus can keep him safe!
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, always subjected to torture/torment/attempted rape and abuse by authors (including me) XD
I loved this update =^.^= though I wish there was more action between sivious and severus I would have loved seeing severus beat the snot out of him
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOH Jealous Snape is always good! But now I'm wondering... Who IS this new professor anyway? SS, I get... but how?
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i agree... a jealous snape is the best XD squee!!
I'm really likin this fic =^.^=
person Alaine
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good start, you've certainly managed to capture my interest! I like the way how you managed to keep Harry and Severus in character, I can totally see this Snape in the books/movies. Futhermore, I wanted to say I haven't found a single spelling mistake, so I'm very pleased with that. I hope you will continue this story and update soon!
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A good start point! I can't wait to see where these two stubborn boys take it.

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