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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How rude! What a mean way to end a chapter! It was a rather fab chapter though and a good extension to this great story. I will forgive your meanness and write you some more nice reviews if you update soon? ;-)
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i do belive its time for harry to leave school i think it will be safe but i also want luc to save harry to are harry should save himeself and go driectly to luc
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can't leave it like this! it's too exciting, hehe
By the way, you didn't say what creature Harry is. Are you going to tell later in the story?
I hope you update really soon, i really like your story
By the way, you didn't say what creature Harry is. Are you going to tell later in the story?
I hope you update really soon, i really like your story
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very sad chapter harry lost his baby i loved the way they buried their child and had an angel keeping watch over the baby. I have to say i certainly wouldn't want to see a photo of a two month old babys body. Thats morbid.Dumbledore and the order of the phionex need to be sorted out. Ron weasley is a right evil little git in this story. I hope harry and lucius will have more children before this wonderful story is finished. Keep up the good work.
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter keep going and post soon
bye bye
bye bye
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! love it, so what kind of creature is Harry?
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic. I love the storyline and Harry/Lucius is my Favorite pairing.
Just a word of advice, you might want to get a beta to read your work over before you post, as there are several spelling mistakes.
Otherwise I love this story and can't wait to see where you take it.
Slyth
Just a word of advice, you might want to get a beta to read your work over before you post, as there are several spelling mistakes.
Otherwise I love this story and can't wait to see where you take it.
Slyth
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very vey good keep going and post
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very interesting start. I love it!
Please update chapter 4 soon. ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 4 soon. ^_^
Jan