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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a hot chapter. It may be good for you to use a Beta to iron out some of the grammar and punctuation errors (they make it hard to read) but the story is awesome... love mean Snape in this... so wish I was hermione!!
Please add on...??
Please add on...??
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi lexi,
great beginning.I loved this chapter.The only problem was that the nearly complete lack of ponctuation marks made it a bit difficult to read.However I cannot wait to read more.(((H)))Sureves Epans
great beginning.I loved this chapter.The only problem was that the nearly complete lack of ponctuation marks made it a bit difficult to read.However I cannot wait to read more.(((H)))Sureves Epans
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope there is more to this. It has a wonderful start.
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful. I can't wait to read more soon.
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April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the first chapter. Plz Update soon.