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for A More Worldly Man

by Lomonaaeren

schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad to see two of your stories come to a close but you have a way of ending things that makes ms just... finally let that breath out. I'm thrilled to see what you will come up with next :)
person Mangacat
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHAHAHahahahaha... that epilogue was the most amazing thing!! I can savely say it's the best chapter of the whole series. I love all the little comments you had the the end of each paragraph , what with Harry's arse and Hermiones bedroom !! Oh my God, that was sooo fantastic to read I really don't dare to write anything anymore compared to what managed to produce with all of your stories!! Keep going, really!
Cat
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo going to miss this!
schedule July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't want it to end! I'm sooo going to miss this story! Fantastic job!
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 25!!!
person Mangacat
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHAHahahahaa... I knew they would have planned something like that from the moment Draco brewed the potion. But it's really cute how it played out. I think Lucius really will have to mull it over for a long time, being bested by his son!! Oh my GOSH!! *g* Can't wait for the last chapter for it was a really interesting ride!!
Cat
person bunnicle
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just have on thing to say, that was fucking aaawesome!
person Mangacat
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it... such fantastic article, Rita should get the wizards equivalent of the pulitzer for her efforts!! And it should set some heads straight in certain positions!!! I can't wait for the conclusion!
Cat
person SP777
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #23...

You know, out of ALL the stories you've done, I enjoy this one the most. It has
an interesting mix of intrigue, quick wit, an interesting plotline and humor mixed
in...having humor in a story is always a plus to me.

If you ever did some type of continuation of this storyline, let it be a focus on Harry's powers, because of the simple fact you've made it seem like it's an entity of its own and as a reader, you've got me curious.

Besides all those fancy tricks you did with Harry's powers, with the brewing and
devouring of magic, you can't live us hanging without some tibit of what else Harry
can do.

But, then again, that's just me, I always did love a good mystery, with a good dose
of the supernatural mixed in. Makes you think and ask questions...

Anyway, keep up the good work on this one, because I know it's drawing to a close
or is it CotG I'm thinking about?
person SP777
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
..con't

oh, and about the article, it was very objective the way you told it through
Skeeter's eyes. If I hadn't been there to witness the proceedings myself
[you should know what I mean] and seen the truth, I would have been leery
of what she wrote.

But, like I said, she was objective AND she didn't fawn all over Harry in the
article nor did she sensationalize anything, it was to the point, as ALL journalists
should be, sometimes.

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