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I like it. Please update soon.

hello, number one let me congratulate you on the twins, I have 3 children myself...may have one more eventually, I like even numbers LOL

I am notoriously bad about leaving reviews, I dont mean to be, but I am getting better LOL

So onto the story....I am going to second CharlotteBlack in that it is a good story, but it is seeming very rushed. Believe me, I understand the fear that if you dont hurry and get it down you will lose it, so dont take this as a flame, just constructive criticism and helpful advice meant in good spirit. truth is if I didnt think you had potential I wouldnt bother leaving the review. There has been alot of plot put into 5 chapters, the adoption, the sex, the babies the marriage...it is going to take alot of work to tie them all up, but I have no doubts you can do it, just perhaps slow down a bit, give a little more insight into what is going on.


I look forward to seeing how you progress, luv. Congrats again on the babies.


Happy Writing!
SG

Excellent. I think that Severus was wrong to force her to marry him the way he did. If he truly cares about the babies then he needs to behave better towards Hermione because stress isn't good for pregnant women. She will have to start eating better soon if she wants a healthy pregnancy though. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.

uhmm (:

me likes

wanna read more (:

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.

Wow congrats! Since you are expecting, I will forgive you for the next chapter where Severus isn't very nice. But only this one time lol

Woohoo, I so can't wait to see where you go with this story! Great job!

I like it. Please update soon.