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by lexi1498

schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon. I hope that Hermione is pregnant by Severus, then maybe they can learn to get along with each other and possibly begin a relationship. As for her real family. I hope that she eventually decides to meet them. I can't wait to read the next chapter soon.
person anncee
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
congrats on your twins!! love the story by the way! can't wait to read more!
person KellyJCR
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this idea it has a interesting plot so I hope you will continue. The only thing that I find a litle annoying is that i don't think Snape would throw a word like "hate" around so casually and, Hermione wouldn't just call her former potions proffesor a "jerk". Sorry I don't like giving critisisms but, other than that it is quite good. Please update more and keep up the good work.
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great start. I look forward to reading more soon.
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person wicraven
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would like to read more. I would have liked to know more about what the plot of the story really is, but it was absolutely enough to peak my interest so I hope another chapter will be added soon.

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