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by CherryStarburst

schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The jump in time was fine. And the chapter was only really confusing during the scene in Dumbledore's office... the burning of the arms... Dumbledore disappearing... And I am sure that those things will eventually be cleared up so that's ok. lol.
person ZipMeOff
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm sorry to put it that way, but this chapter was useless... it's the SAME as in the book, but with f&g around and words like "crap" and "bollocks". Same fucking thing! If you don't want to create a new plotline, at LEAST please don't re-write the story we all remember... especially if it adds nothing to your own story...
But at least, be sure i'll continue to read and review Pretty Kitty. I like this story a great deal, i was just displeased by this chapter.
I don't mean to be...well, mean, by writting it that way, but I'm sure a lot of the readers have the same opinion. Your story is loveable, you just copy the book a lot to much. It's OK if you keep the same plotline as JK does, just don't...re-write it.
Anyway, I'll keep an eye on this story. I just loooooved the other chapters, so be it.
good luck for the next one!!
have a nice day
person Kat
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, the collar is back! Although... wouldn't Harry's uniform hide it, anyway? What with having a tie and all.
person imagineaworld
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow...

i... errr... wow...

this is really really really good. (and thats saying something coz normally I HATE slash...)
nobody is OOC, and its written really well.
i hope you'l write some more soon... PLEASE??? PLEASE??? PLEASE??? PLEASE??? PLEASE??? .........................................
person Darkless
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heheh, awsome. Had to put my kitty down to review. I giggle over cat!Harry, and the first one I read was 'Hiss me Harry' - very cute and lots of potential for fun. You still haven't addressed whether scruffing Harry is a problem or not. Twincest mixed with cat!Harry in a threesome is an hillarious combination. Please continue.
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet when I read that Harry had given them a new collar for him... and then the end was hillarious! I loved it!!!
person wynja
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*LOL!* Poor Harry just CAN'T get a break! But the naughty kitty should know better than try to HIDE his christmas-present like that! Of course the twins would want to show it off!
person Jan
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, those twins are at it again, poor Harry ^_^

Please update chapter 37 soon :D

Jan
person magentah
schedule February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if the Slytherins call Harry "Four Ears" now..

;D Nice fluffy chapter, with a healthy dose of kink-tease, I'd say. Now just hoping for a nice heaping pound of kinky fun in the next update!
person Elphaba
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! Glad it worked out the way tey wanted it to!

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