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for All Coming Back to me Now

by Utopia

schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the idea of 'Dark Magic' becoming the wizard equivalent of the Rolling stones, and I cannot fault how much of a story you have packed into two chapters. It is articulate and believeable in its own context, which is amazing. I do have a problem with Hermione giving up even her own genetic signature to stay with him; it's a sacrifice greater than of one's own life, even if it's a happy outcome for their new family.
person Lelir
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story!
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person luvhp
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shew. WOW!!!
I just love your stories, let me tell you.
The first chapter was so long and detailed I was surprised to see more...happily.
Then when you had Lucius CHEAT...oh my, I was so sad...
Thankfully Hermione forgave him...ONCE :)
Lovely story! Truly.
And I loved that he only had one grandaughter, all the rest were males, lol.
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Precious....sad, yet happy, adorable....there are so many words that could be used to describe this story, but in an attempt to narrow it down to one, I have chosen 'awesome.' Continue the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Kisses and good luck hugs.

~~DragonFyre~~
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH!!! OH OH OH!!!! I wanna naked poster of Lucius!!!!!! Please!!!!
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: This chapter reminds me of LadyDeathFaerie
person AlexandraMalfoy
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I had a good laugh. Lucius, Severus, Remus and Sirius in a band? And Draco as their manager? Fantastic! My ex-boyfriend, 22 years older than me, had his midlife-crisis, but it was not as funny as your final chapter. Marvellous!!! Keep on writing! Thank you!! LOL, Alex
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
giggles...that was great
person AlexandraMalfoy
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and what I have forgotten to say: Will you update A Thief to Catch a Thief; a Death Eater to Catch a Death Eater? It is a cool story and I'd like to read more of it. So, if you have time, give ourself a push and continue. Please! Thanks and LOL, Alex

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