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November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE MORE PLEASE MORE MORE MORE
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November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There was another HGSS or SSOC fic with a suspiciously similar premise.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
It's been a while since you updated this story, and I know that sometimes real life takes over and makes writing hard, but I hope you are going to finish this story. I am hoping for an update soon, but to update at all would be brill!
thanks, Lou.
It's been a while since you updated this story, and I know that sometimes real life takes over and makes writing hard, but I hope you are going to finish this story. I am hoping for an update soon, but to update at all would be brill!
thanks, Lou.
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I really enjoyed reading this story and look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon.
Sincerely,
DessertRose
Sincerely,
DessertRose
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16: Those two never seem to have any relaxed moments together. Snape is running ragged with his spying and now his forced fornicating, and poor Trudy has to cope with the spell. I do hope she learns some useful magic and is actually capable of carrying it out.
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July 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17: Whoa, Trudy has a backbone. And it seems Snape has a heart. A perfect combination. And dare I imagine that there was finally a shag that was not orchestrated by the spell? Or maybe it was just some good, old-fashioned kissing. But the air has been cleared.
Whew, then it all goes downhill in an avalanche. Poor Snape. Does he get beaten up like that often? And why would it matter if Snape was screwing the Muggle? Why would Voldie care if Snape got some on the side? Oh
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July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the first half of the chapter, but hated the second. 'He Who I Find Most Tedious & Tiresome' ruins the chapter, the violence the Tedious One commits and the violence her encourages from Dolohov and Yaxley against Snape are too excessive. The violence that Snape forces himself to commit on Trudy to try to keep her safe is an oxymoron at best and far beyond anything that was called for.
I agree with what La Bib said quite a while back: "Frankly I don
I agree with what La Bib said quite a while back: "Frankly I don
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this. My favorite story on here hand's down. I hope you update soon. I love Snape and I think you got him down good.
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God you have me hooked on this story.. are you still writing this if so please please update
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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I find it interesting that Severus, an outcast himself, would be so adamant that she not be treated as one. I think he has finally found someone to whom he can be the man he should have been from childhood. In it's own twisted way, it's actually kind of romantic. And Ollivander is a racist twit.