rate_review Reviews

Love the story...

This is a really good story, but there are a few problems. You have Harry getting pregnant as a male, No Problem. But then you have the talk in the infirmary about him having become a hermaphrodite, OK different but ok. But lastly, when giving birth you have him getting cut open due to not having the part necessary for normal delivery. This is wrong. A hermaphrodite has both male and female parts and so having a natural birth might be difficult but would be ok. It would be better if you just dropped the gender issue altogether, or say it was being a difficult birth and so had to go and cut the baby out. But, everything considered, I enjoyed the story.

I just cant get over the fact that after you made Harry suffer for so long, that you didn't at least have him cold towards the Malfoys for a longer period of time rather then a measley half a chapter. Where's the anger? Where's his strength of character? Where's his backbone? Where's Harry? Disappointed with the trite fluffy ending but otherwise a commendable effort.

I can't believe I waited this long to read this! I put it in "yet to read" list and its really good! I wish it wasn't done but it is, I laughed, I cried (not really) and things you would normally do in a good movie or...a fanfiction[anessavanella@aim.com]

i liked it, but try to learn to use "the" its missing a hundred times

oh and there is a difference not many people KNOW between "now and know"
NOW I wish you a good day :)

wow that was a great story yay i think i've already read this story but oh well i juswt reread it i enjoyed it again.

This is a good story, at least from the first chapter. Do us a favor though... Go back and reread the story and look at it close. There are a LOT of missed words and misused words. Help is only an e-mail away.

--RD

Thank you, I really did enjoy the story!(smile)Even though there was some unfinished business in the end. All in all I really like the your story! Did I mentioned that I enjoyed your story? Thank you again.

A very good story just a little rushed at the end, it's all good though.