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for One Cold Winter�s Night

by carlsonta

person Anon
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Myrna
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well...this is a good start :)
It's getting interesting...all Snape fanfiction are interesting, but I'm curious to see what yours will become! Keep going ^^
person neelix
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I think this is a good start, but you need to look at your grammar and punctuation. Do you have a Beta? It would be useful for you to have one because they can check over your spellings and stuff before you post.

Good story!

neelix x
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting star. I can't wait to see how this story unfolds.

Tiffany
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more to see what happens to Hermione now that Snape has caught her in his pensieve.

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