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for The Curse

by Roedhunt

schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow need more pleasee!
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't end here!!! I sooo need chapter 5!!!
person Jilliane
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 4)

The END?????????

Nooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!! You can't end it here! No, you must write more!! I want to read about how they tell Lucius it's Harry instead of the one he intended. I want to read about how Harry explains to Ginny, and she accepts it. I want to read about how Harry handles a pregnant Draco. I want to read about the baby, dammit! Please consider writing more!! Please?
person avihenda
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's not the ending I thought you would go for. But it was an interesting read. :-)
person Extraho
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
seriously? is that the end? I WANT MORE!!! i love this story, it has endless potential. how will ginny react. what is draco like preggers? what will lucius say? boy or girl? come ooooon !!!!
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha...Harry is too adroable! It makes me giggle! ^.^
person Jilliane
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM


The more I read, the more I like! I was glad to see you had updated. Can you do it again soon? Please?
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 4! Did Ginny mean she loved Harry but wasn't in love with him? Does she have someone on the side?
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope they get that 5% and the baby is a boy.
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I like the way this story is going. One thing I would love to see, and it would fit in well here, is that Draco finally put Harry in his place about Harry actually being just as much of a biggot with prejudices towards Slytherins as Slytherins have against half bloods and muggle borns. He's also worried about homophobia too. Not one story I've read, and that's been hundreds, have never had this little showdown. As in chap. 3 here, Draco tried to talk normally, even joke with Harry, but all he gets in return is shouting, being argumentitive, and being downright mean towards Draco. That's actually what started it all anyhow. Just because Draco was rich, and a little snobby, Harry turned his back on a friendship because of listening to the biggoted comments from Ron over a family feud, and Hagrid spreading biggotry towards Slytherins. That makes Harry just as bad. If he had given Draco at least a chance when they first met, things could have been totally different, and Draco could have possibly been saved from going down the wrong road. Actually, after reading DH, Draco didn't really want anything to do with Voldermort, it was forced on him. I would just love to see Draco finally shut Harry up, and cut him down a couple of notches over his biggotry which he so denies he has.

Thanks,

MightyGryffindor

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