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for Better Than Cookies {COMPLETE}

by crmoon

schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can someone shoot Bella? She is such a pain in the ass. Why can't she just leave people alone? Where the hell is Harry? When will the potion be ready? More please. This is a very good story so far and I cannot wait till the next chapter. Please update as soon as you can.
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please...I think it would have been cool is Severus took care of Harry. I really like this story. I'm not sure what to think about Hermione yet. Please update soon.
person alma
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start.
person alma
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking good can't wait for more.
person Selera
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see this update. It looks like it will be an amazing story.
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please...this is interesting...
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is interesting. Although it would be better if you separated the beginning like you did at the end so its not all lumped together. I have never actually read a story with Severus/Hagrid as a pairing, slightly creepy but not that bad. ^^ I look forward to reading the next chapter.
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
no way I can't wait to read the rest of this . It's such a shame that this is a sorely neglected category I'm glad to see you adding to it especially with a piece that promises to be hot

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