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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this was a great start and I absolutely can't wait for the follow-up.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A meeting with Lucius is coming soon. Spy for the elves? That's a nice little twist.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. this is a very good beginning
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Writing on paper always looks longer then when its typed. love this story can't wait to read more
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay i like what i ve read so far i hope that luc makes harry happy oh and tom needs to pat for being greed
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you could make them soulmates and don't forget let harry become a older before you start sex but let luc realize that harry is his mate when he see them I'm not a writer but know a lot of good plots i read thousands of books and fanfic for funny
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...more please...this is really good so far.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter two. Liked the whole Lucius being a spy, but not for 'ol Dumbledore. Until next time.