rate_review Reviews

This is really great writing and 'what could have been' scenes from the 6th and 7th book. And the smut is very descriptive and hot. Lovely hotness indeed. I do hope you'll consider adding another chapter or two when you have the chance to write some more on this story. And I love the way you portray Draco. It's not like in every story with Draco being bottom that people can make him not so weak looking and easily hurt. For as a human its common to be sensitive and depressed from losses for we feel emotions, but that is no excuse for Draco to be a sodden mess. However, I really like this Draco you are portraying in your story, for he's fragile, yes, but he's a fighter and I like that. Looking forward to reading more of your material.

~SasuNaru723~

Oh my!!! Soooo need chapter 3!!!

Oh my! This is fantastic! I love how you changed the scene there, very believeable, and with the state Draco and Snape were in back then, very possible. I'm a bit worried over the way Lucius died, and hope that Voldemort doesn't have the power to kill whoever has the Dark Mark [including Draco]. This is beautifully written. I look forward to how Draco's involvement changes the story, and to Harry and Draco's budding relationship. Wonderful job.

it was fucking awesome!

i loved it more please!!

O.o That was soooo interesting...and the smut was excellent! MORE!

Breath-taking. The imagery alone... wow, speechless. I got so caught up that when it ended I was left completely bereft. Beautifully, masterfully done, much like your other. I loved the dialogue between Ron, Hermione, and Harry, it was very canon and I can picture it clearly even though you gave no descriptions as to how the characters were delivering those lines. Brilliant! My former statement holds true, I look forward to more from you.

hi! i so love vulnerable!draco fics. it allows us to see a side of draco that was not really explored in canon. harry taking him along to the horcrux hunt was a nice touch, expecially since they did not go as an established couple. it adds to the realism of the story. i honestly did not know whether to laugh or not in the locker scene. it was a surprise, a pleasant one. ;)

Sooo need chapter 2!!!