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I enjoyed this chapter very much, hilarious and meaningful, especially the meeting between Draco and Hermione. Please update soon.

Brilliant learning curve for Lucius, please update soon.

*Snort* That was too funny. Great update! I can't wait for more!!

Oooooh ooooooh let me guess let me guess!!! Your inspiration was "don't you think she looks tired"...

Can't wait to read more! Brilliant!

Bad_Kitty_Cat

Honey, having read your lengthy author's note, I just wanted to say that there are plenty of readers out there that love your story and I am one. I have throughly enjoyed each chapter and look forward to more, hope to see a little more of Draco too!! Also I was curious about the 4 marks (that Harry's got) from Haldor, were they inspired from Anita Blake? Also will we get anymore about Harry and Haldor?

Anyway in short I love the story, keep writing!!

An entertaining story. I'm not sure it could be placed in any one category as it is has drama, erotica, humor, romance. I see once you have Death Eater skills it is difficult to set them aside when they could come in handy. I do feel badly you have a dysfunctional Severus. He is my favorite HP character. I hope you will find it in your heart to cure him.

Yep,still reading and still intrigued. Don't let people discourage you. I like your style of writing. It's succinct and descriptive without being overly 'purple.' Of course, we all can improve. I write fanfic on another site and I get loads of corrections. Accept them for what they are and go on. Anyway, back to the chapter: The Lysander scene in the beginning was just adorable. I can see Hermione being that type of mother-- she can't be too fussed about a little dirt, but would want the child to learn.

I don't know what to make of Draco. Has he apologized to her for his involvement in the revel that got her pregnant? Or did I read that wrong? If he hasn't, does she know he was there? You've raised so many questions. I suppose I'll have to just keep reading. No complaint. Just write faster.

Screw the porn, I would PAY to see Severus Snape tying pink bows on little frilly wedding decorations. What a changed world it is when the two most powerful Death Eaters are either poufs in the making or crazy. I loved the chapter. I still want to know what's up with Haldor and Harry, and what Lucius' new reign of superiority will bring to the vampire front.

Lucius' beginning scenes were a hoot by the way.

Chapter 14: Lucius

There is no need to run at all. This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. I truly enjoy every bit of it and I can not wait to see what Hermione's going to do. I don't have children, but I am the aunt of many kids and the very last thing you do is upset someone's baby. It's that whole 'mother protecting her young' thing. Can't wait!!