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by soldiersgirl0709

person Mary
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Didn't lose me. I don't mind a little SS/HG/LM. In fact I think there needs to be more. More!!!! LOL
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In my opinion, there is nothing hotter than Lucius and Severus, except Lucius, Hermione and Severus. Loved the dream, wishe it could be real.

person Anon
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Please write a story with these three. I love the pairings individually. But I devour these three together, and there are so few stories. I love your work, and I would love for you to write them together. Please, Please, Please!!!
person Sarah Timontry
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucius and Severus senerio = soooooooo hot!
person luna love
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You didn't go too far at all. It was really hot!

And please do write a Severus/Hermione/Lucius fic. There aren't enough of those, and a lot of those are about the men sharing Hermione, without the slash. And even though that makes Hermione a lucky girl, I think this threesome needs the Severus/Lucius relationship too; it's only fair to the boys, has lesser chance at jealousies, and is of course very very very HOT! ;D
person Anon
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it!
person ffpoisongirl
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well you certainly didn't lose me! I think it was very well done, and honestly I'd like to see that scenario. I'd say more but I have to get up in less than five hours. Keep writing!
person Darkephoenix
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet merciful goddess, that was FABULOUS! To be in the middle of a Lucius and Severus sandwich, what more can a girl want?
person LuciTM
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I would never have guessed that this was your first shot at slash, if I hadn't already read all of your other stories. You seem to have a natural talent for all things erotic... of course, written. I really wouldn't know about the rest. *rambling*

Anyway, I may be biased, since I usually ONLY read slash and it far from squicks me, but I thought you did a marvelous job. :3

Can't wait to see more. ^.^

love.
luci.
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did you go to far?????? HELL NO!!!!!! I can't possibly be the only one that wants the dream to become a reality?????? That was deliriously hot!! Lucius was so calm about her question and her admission. The way you entwine lust with sensuality is brilliant. There's just one thing left to say - "I must not be jealous of a fictional character". One day my mantra might actually work. ;) LMAO

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