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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

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person Leentjef
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow very very good chapter
keep up the graet work
and post soon
bye bye
person Sumire
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is one of the most beautiful stories i've ever read.
Please write more soon, I'm looking forward to read more of Harry and Draco!
I love your way describing their feelings!
Sum
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! that was sweet!!! i love it! I can't wait for more!!
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is very sweet. I'm glad that Harry is slowly getting better, and that they are going to be going very slowly. Great job on the pace of the story, it is going great
person Rosei
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

Love the kissing! Love the intimacy!!!
Excellent writing and absolutely love the feelings
between the two of them!!!!

Thanks,
R
person KendraLee
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update faster dammit! And by that I mean the story's refreshing and tantalizing.
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is just such an amazing story. I am really getting into it and I am actually seeing it happen and getting very attatched to the way these charcters are acting, probably almost as much as I had when reading the real HP series by JK> I can't wait for another update. Please keep writting, you are a very believeable writer.
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cuteness! I can't believe Harry asked for that for his birthday! O.o I do hope Draco gets it for him! ^.^ Keep updating!
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice!! I loved that! More please!! this story is awesome! It keeps me guessing! That is good!
person avihenda
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sweet chapter.

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