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for Undesirable - COMPLETE

by slashpervert

person fudgebaby
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this story, hoe for another one soon. Great original plot!
person Rosei
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay!!! I'm totally addicted!!!!

Love the shattered HP!! Love the Draco that needs
redemption!!! Love the bizarre flashbacks!!!

Thanks,
R
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the combination of the torture scene and then the fluff. You do it so well. Thanks for updating!
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter can't wait for then next one
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I keep saying this, but poor Harry! I feel awful for him. I'm glad that he was able to at least talk to Draco about a little of what was bothering him. I'm really glad they seem to be getting closer, even if their relationship is unethical from a professional standpoint. This makes me want to cry, it's so well written. I could feel every single emotion of these two. This is great.
person avihenda
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not much draco harry interaction in this chapter. :-( but hopefully more in the next. :-) keep it up!
person qwerty
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great writing. I really love your writing style. The pace of everything is perfect and realistic.
Great job
update!
person avihenda
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! another chapter! :-) thanks!
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how this is unfolding. So good!
person qwerty
schedule June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it!

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