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by WingsofaDream

person Elphaba
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Love that they are sniffing the false Moody out!
person Elphaba
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I forgot the parseltongue (so spelled wrong) I want HArry to tell someone. i love Snape acting as a, a, a, Parent other then the whole helping with the heat thing! LOL
person Coobs
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it :P update soon!
person Jan
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, you've done beautifully with these past few chapters, as always ^_~

Please update chapter 19 soon ^_^

Jan
person Laie
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dancing mushrooms FTW!! Please make them appear agaiiiiiin! Ya' know ya' want to! XD

This fic is getting more and more exciting, I look forward the next chapter *-*
person toads70
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter! sorry your new years was awful :( hugs and can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have NO IDEA how badly I needed this chapter. I've had a week from hell, and this just makes everything a little bit better.

Love that they're in the Forest again, free to be wolves. Well, werewolves anyways. Love the idea of Severus taking Harry out for his birthday even if I was a little worried about the full moon thing. It turned out okay though. At least it wasn't April... I loved the Sweeney Todd play (and I'd love to see the actual play in real life); the movie was excellent and I loved the references to the actors/characters. It made me laugh. When my friends I went to go see it in theatres, we were almost kicked out because one of my friends yelled out "It's Snape!" when we first saw him, and I said it was Bellatrix when I first saw her, and another friend laughed when she heard/saw Pettigrew. We referred to them as Snape/Bellatrix/Pettigrew rather than Judge Turpin/Mrs. Lovett/whatever his name was. It was great. I was a little scared about the sharing beds part. I was sure Fenrir would smell Severus on Harry and kill him. He came close the last time, when Severus magically prepared Harry for Fenrir in April. But I still liked it. I understand it, and I got the comforting aspect of it completely. The shoes thing made me laugh. Remus! My God, Remus scared me at first. I thought there was a rogue werewolf or someone on Voldemort's side that had tracked them down. But it was just Remus. I want to see where this goes. And Sirius! Severus has already started on the "Sirius-is-innocent!" thing. I can't wait to see where this goes... Keep it up; you're amazing.

I just need to keep my mind open. That's why I'm willing to read Harry/Harry, even though I'd rather you wrote another Fenrir/Harry. I don't do fem-slash though. I just can't. If it's simple (like just the relationship aspects) but not detailed sex scenes, that's okay. I can handle that. Same goes for Severus/Hermione. I can handle it in passing, but not in detail. ~dpa06~
person Kuromei
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* Bye-bye, Barty! XD Have a nice trip back to Azkaban! *evil smile*

Moving on, I'm glad the snake from the previous chapter is okay. ^////^ And, though I'm still worried about what'll happen in the future of the story, I'll be staying tuned for as long as it takes. =3 Just don't be surprised if I don't/can't review every chapter. I work a lot. XP *waits for the next chapter*
person toads70
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter :) when the bludger hit harry i winced from the pain i'm sure he felt :P and then hitting his head again twice after that ouch! can't wait for the next chapter :D hope your new years was good!
person Rokkis
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! Am sooo glad that they finally caught Moody. Must admit that it's fun to see Fenrir's reputation becoming less fierce:D

Cheers! And a Happy New Year!

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