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for Sacrifice

by WingsofaDream

person Eldorna
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. :) I was a little misty eyed at the end of the chapter. I hope you will continue.
person tinkita
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I am looking forward to the update!!!
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good beginning
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello ! This is an interesting beginning. The premises are original. Quiet and mature Harry is lovely. I find it really interesting that despite being bitten he hasn't transformed into a wolf. My guess is that it has something to do with the prophecy. Say he can't have anything incapacitate him until Voldemort is dead...well it did sound a good idea until I wrote it down hum...Anyway, gruff Fenrir is good too. I know he's kind of a psycho in HP but hey, a bit of OOCness sometimes doesn't hurt. It's sad that they lose Isaacs he seemed like a good man. I can already see Fenrir's reaction when he'll really realise what he's got himself into.
thank you for sharing, I'll look forward to reading the next chapter ! Until then !
person Felinity
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start, sounds like its going to be a good story :)
person jenv
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. i love the whole harry isnt shifting, yet is a werewolf. its a whole new twist on any werewolf story ive ever read. i love harry's name being Pup, its really cute. i definitely cant wait for your next chapter!
person Madhater
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how sad i feel really sad right now TT_TT but wonderful story i look forward to seeing the next chapter i just cant wait. ^_^
person merav14
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love HarryFenrir fics, and this one was well written, unlike a lot of fics out there (well done!). So far it was interesting; I wanna see more of how Harry and Fenrir interact with each other.
I hope you will continue this fic; waiting for the next chap.
merav.
person alma
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good start.
person Anguloce
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this pairing and this definitely has good potential. please update soon!

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