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for Ashes of Armageddon

by emilywaters

schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, you know what I think of this chapter, but I'll just say this, I'm glad that the misunderstanding has been cleared up. I'm glad to see Harry and Severus finally able to find a way back to each other, and that it seems that it will work out. I have mixed feelings about the whole Al situation but you know I'm a spaz so I'll keep that to myself. lol. Yay for Harry/Sev alone time! I can't believe it's almost over, what freaking journey they've made. Great update Em : )
person Waters' Fan
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me, but I'll be patient. :-)
person Seraphiccandy
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just finished with chap65 . You truly had me at the edge of my seat this time. I cam only hope that Harry gives Sev some damn good loving to make up for all this shit he has had to endure yet AGAIN. Is there no end to it ??? Is he damned to relive the past over and over again? Enough already...time for some happy times. Oh and P.S hahhaha random-unamed- auror. haha. Thats what you get for hurting Sev.hahaha
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?! *dies* Okay. Ginny [and that Auror) was the character deaths you mentioned? The only one? I've been stressing for nothing?

Okay, on more serious terms. I'm a bit unnerved, but I'm happy. Really relieved. I'm sure that Severus has misunderstood something. Or at least I hope so. Maybe Hermione was suggesting that Harry should ask to move into Spinner's End? Or Hermione offering to take Al? Although even if he did understand correctly, it is sad to see him become hurt so easily, although it probably doesn't help that he decided to let go of everything and just depend on someone else [in the last chapter]. While it is understandable for him to glare at the unfairness of the world when he really has acted so selflessly all this time, I wish his and Harry's love for each other would have curbed some of that angst and self-hate. Wonderful job with this latest chapter. Thank you for telling me "no more death." lol It was nice to see Ron and Hermione in one household, Ron and Harry's banter, and Harry taking care of both of his great loves, even if that meant keeping them separated.
person DTDY
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor severus.
person Spinner's Beginning
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
beautiful chapter as always. I feel so bad for Sev right now. sob.
person kunitsu
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, such a selfless thing to do. I am sure Harry will re-assure Severus I just hope it will be soon.
person whitehound
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He's being needlessly melodramatic, of course, because of his low self-esteem. I suspect we're going to find out that Hermione meant something else entirely,. but even if she did mean he should go back to Spinner's End I'm sure she only meant "For a few weeks or months, while Al gets over the first shock of his mother's death, and then Harry can visit you there while I babysit" - not that he and Harry should separate.
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn Al, he's ruining everything! I hope this self imposed retreat is nipped in the bud....there's got to be a way for all of them to get on. Severus/Harry must be together, especially after all they've gone through. Can you just kill the demon brat? LOL. J/K...well sorta. Anyway this was beautifully written, I especially like the end bit, I could really feel Sev's emitions. great writing there Emily.

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