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Wow, its so nice that everyone is slowly starting to accept Harry and his relationship with Severus. I wonder what Al ang Ginny will say when they find out about Severus

Aigh! This is a wonderfully frustrating and agonizing fic thus far. One thought: Snape never identified himself by name to Dumbledore's portrait. That might have been a good idea as sometimes phrases or words might be keyed to undo or to do something...

On to the next chapters!

The mirror scene was very touching. :) I'm a bit wary about the next chapter, and surprised that Snape didn't remember to think of the excuse that Al ran away from him. Although Harry's admission of "permanent" may have distracted him, I suppose. I'm worried about Albus's reaction, but I hope it goes well. I can't imagine Ginny will be a stellar character here. I really hope that Luna and Neville can be together. It is too bad that seeing Harry and Severus heal, and being reassured that he wasn't bad for watching out allow him the motivation once again to start over (with Luna), but I hope that this dynamic changes. Wonderful job.

wow. that was amazing. After hours of reading I thought I was nearing the end and it seems like theres still unfinished bussiness to write about. I think your writing style is really well developed and the way you have portrayed all the characters is really believable. A lot of other authors tend to make Severus into this self-assured sex god. you have succeeded in making him so much more human and so much more believable as a person while keeping him completly in character.Also, I appreciate the fact that they still havn't had actual sex yet. I thought I would mind and get annoyed but I havn't. Really its quite starteling to me as I usually only read porn without a plot type storys.lol. But this story really captured my imagination and I hope you continue writing so that I can continue reading :)

Severus is healing! And even Neville acknowledge that! *happy dance*
I love how the Cockatrice are following Severus around; too cute!
Great chapter!

Very nice that now he has places where he is welcomed and belongs, and he's realised it.

Severus is healing. That's wonderful.:-) I really love chapters with so much harmony.

But I think there is still something wrong, I can't define what it is, but Albus reacted kind of strange when he saw Severus last time.., so perhaps this meeting with Severus, Albus and Harry won't be positiv...and you said something about a major crisis and all the other reviewers thought it could happen something to Severus and Harry when there're out with the cockatrices...but that would be too easy??
I'm not sure, but could there be a crisis after this meeting??

Soo I cant't wait to read the next chapter:-)

Wow just wow. I love how Harry is being so patient with severus and really showing him that he actually cares.

'"There's no such thing as too much information," he said gravely. "All date is valuble."'

Genius... just... genius! ^_^ ROFLMAO

What a warm, fluffy scene amid all the strife that Severus had to put up with!
Lovely chapter! Great job!