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Ack, lovely truly lovely. As much as I would love to send you an e-mail and ask I want the ending to be a surprise because if you tell me it will end horribly I don't think I will be able to stand it lol. I honestly think that there is a piece of something dark in Harry, like that part of vodlies horuxes is still in Harry and voldimort is sending his nastiness through it. Lol.

KP

Update soon!

ok. this is the thing. i really like the angst but i'd really like a happy ending also. I love harry and the way he's acting just breaks my heart.

and the truth comes out, sev loves harry ^___^ quick question though Neville asked to borrow severus for a whole day so he has to go back after he sleeps again then? T___T

wow very good chapter keep going and post soon
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You know, that makes it so much more tragic... but somehow makes it more hopeful too.

Ch 18: One word -- WOW. I'm amazed at how cruel Harry is and shocked (despite myself) that he would allow his friends to beat and humiliate Snape in such a perverse manner. I almost thought things were going to turn sexual...I wonder. As soon as Neville showed up like the knight in shining armor he is, I was already relieved for poor Snape. I thought it was sad that when they were sitting around listening to Ron sing, you wrote "the three friends" instead of "his three friends" -- just that little detail alone further illustrates how utterly alone Snape truly is. I feel bad for him, but I have hope that he and the D.A. will be able to come to some positive conclusions about the Deathly Hallows. I'm eager to discover just what transpired during Harry's time being dead...You have me on the edge of my seat with anticipation. Out of curiosity, do you outline your chapters before you write? Do you have the story plotted? I must also add how cool I think the "slave-bond" is -- you've really put a lot of work into developing all the rules and restrictions of the bond. I'm wondering if there isn't some benefit for the "slave" that might give him even an ounce of perceived "power" over the "master". Gosh, I have so many thoughts...it's hard to organize them! I very much look forward to getting the next chapter! Again, thank you so much for updating and thanks for the personal response to my review. =]

Damn...can life get any worse for Severus...Harry needs to be stopped or put out of his misery...but please don't kill him, there must be another way. I understand George's involvement, he's probably still hurting....I hope they don't live to their word and come back for more again and again....they may indeed drive Sev. mad. Harry's already there though. Maybe Hermione or Neville will figure something out ::crossing fingers::

Oh God... Poor Severus... He even tried to RUN! Well, at list ha was not... First, it looked like it. Harry struck his hands with the BELT? Shudder... Plain evil, dressing him up like never before for THIS!

And you made me almost cry at the end... Severus begging for Lily

Oh my I guess this time Harry really hurt Severus emotionally. Somehow I just cant seem to see a pattern to Harry attitude, I hope Hermoine is having better luck. Sorry I might have missed this but why did Hagrid disappear

This is a heartbreaking story! It's not often that a fic really makes you wonder if there could ever be a happy ending, because I really don't see it here, but I'll keep hoping! The last chapter was especially sad, maybe because Harry involved others (which I didn't like much btw) in Severus' humiliation. Really, the physical abuse is bad, but emotional pain and scars can be so much more devastating... I'm very curious to see this story unfold.