rate_review Reviews

It's a Maddeningly sweet tease. Just when you think your going to read it, it's dashed at the end because the story ends. But it was amazing. I'm excited for the next chapter. I love Draco's thoughts on being her first. I mean if I was a guy that would be super amazing and a turn on. Well anyways update soon please.

OMG!!! So...I have been reading this for a while, tho I don't know if I have reviewed yet. Sorry!!! I haven't known what to say.... You are the master of cliff-hangers. I want to know what comes next!!! Like, crazy bad!!!! You're awesome, by the way. you have this way with words that is great, and you keep them in character amazingly well. I applaud you. Can't wait for more!

to true- plus this is what your stories are for i mean chapters like this are literally perfect they make me sigh and laugh and i just can picture it all in my head the wording the scenes its all perfect i love the way you write these two together oh man i really love this chapter i cannot wait for the next one! This is becoming one of my all time favs very rapidly! It's so damn awesome and refreshing super awesome chapter that all i can get out i love the way its really building to love and sexy angst the yull ball room certainly painted it that way! thats so perfect! i really need more! sweet angsty needed oh man oh man its to great!

:O *Faints from the OMG-ness of this chapter*

I LOVE YOU LONG TIME!!!! Please update SOON!!!!! I don't think I can survive a week. OMG!

A beautifully written chapter. Great work :D

Marvelous! I love when I see that you've updated. Don't make us wait too long! Really loved the first sentence of this chapter, very eloquent and great analogy! This is my favorite story on this site....even more then my own Broomsticks stories LOL I don't write the slow build up, but would rather get them together and then throw as much shit at them that I can think of lol...I'd rather save these types of stories for people who know how to write them...and that IS you! hehe This is the best one I've read and I've read so many...My problem with the slow build up stories, is that I lose interest once they kiss/make love, whatever, or when the stories just fizzle and have weak endings. Your writing is superb though and your inner thoughts of the characters, interesting rather then fluffy and boring and I am sure you will keep us all intrigued all the way to the end. 10/10 stars. This is a great story! I recommended it in one of my chapter updates, it's that good!

Keep this up! I love this story.

Ah, my dear, it was a lovely ride! And, I really think that, after this next chapter, we can see if the journey will go a bit further, yeah? :D I can really see them becoming something more. Beautiful story, ilke.

OMG is that not the best chapter ever... the whole night was like foreplay... love it .... great job... i can not wait to read the next chap...

YAY! I can't wait to see what happens! You keep me on the edge, and I'm always checking to see if you put up a new chapter.
Crissy