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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I am glad that Draco is alright with Severus being with Hermione. I thought it was a lovely gesture when Draco gave Severus his mother's ring to use. I look forward to reading more.
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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I never thought that I would read a Snape and Granger story.
I like this one and I would like updates on at poohnation74@yahoo.com if you can.
I know how it is with a one year old, you never seem to have time for yourself.
I like this one and I would like updates on at poohnation74@yahoo.com if you can.
I know how it is with a one year old, you never seem to have time for yourself.
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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. One mistake I noticed however was that you used the word except when it should be accept. I apologize if this offends you. The story is really great. I look forward to reading more soon.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more soon. I am glad that they both love each other and might get married later on.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am not fond of anal sex (reading or otherwise) but you did that really well. i love that severus talked to ron and i love that he did it without raising his voice and without his wand ron was scared-hehehehe survers the little twirp right! :) well i would love to see what the weasleys said to ron (if you would?) i think it would be fun! :) though i am dying to see what severus has in that cupborad!!! do update lots and lots more and soon! :)
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story does have promise.. but only two problems.. one try and find a beta to go over your work and correct a few mistakes you made.. not that many but there are some.. and two as someone already stated Snape is a little too off.. you have to consider they don't use modern American slang... but otherwise this story shows promise
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.