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I love this series! I had actually found it on Fanfiction, but It got suddenly taken down :( amazing story, please keep writing! Your works are one of my top favorites!!!!

Hot, sexy and great!!!

I just finished Ch. 1 and I wasn't expecting this to be so funny! I almost snorted when I read the part about students who aren't "the sharpest tools in the shed" and the list of courses was just hilarious! Mixed House Marriages and How to Make Them Work. *giggle*

That was a great story. Your writing is lovely, the plot is excellent, and the sexual tension is perfect! Keep up the good work and I hope to read more of your writing in the future.

Chapter 9

Lovely story my dear. You are soo funny. You just get me laughing. I shall now have to move to your next story! I am sorry it took me so long to review . I just don

And hello apple goodness in chapter 3! lol. I loved the thought of Ginny taking Muggle Carnival LMAO!

WOW! I was not expecting that at the end of chapter 4. Here I was going along with this naughty broom ride, thinking hey looks like he just gave her some sexual revolution, and then BAM, right in the face LOL! I can't wait to see the reaction!

Chapter 8

This was unexpected, but very satisfying having Hermione take control and make Draco submit. It was very hot too, especially when she set him free! LOL

I like how you are softening Draco up slowly, but keeping him a bad boy. It

Cute and funny! I like the premise, and the list of classes - freakin' hilarious!

Especially wondering about that "Mixed House Marriages and How to Make them Work". Hmmm I wonder if I'll see any more on that class ;) or not. Also talk about some irony with her mouthing off at him to ask if he was in Gryffindor (which hey that was a pretty damn good shut down on her part), only to have her accidentally sign up for Slytherin dorms...nice. I like that touch! XD

I'm looking forward to the other chapters. And because typos vex me as a writer, uh, the hours I've spent trying purge chapters of grammatical and spelling errors, and because I usually want people that spot them to tell me, I hope I'm not crossing the line to point out one. There was:

"She went over their exchanges in her head in an attempt o decipher exactly where it was that Draco had been disrespectful enough to her to warrant her biting comeback."

I think the "o" was meant to be "to", or so my brain supplied as I read along. Anyways off to read chapter 2, I can't wait to see what lays in store!

Chapter 7

Ah JennyPenny, I