rate_review Reviews

hay don't leave it there up date soon please

Good story, please update soon.

good story.

O.o le gasp this is good.

and interesting....please write more

Great!!!

A few words for you.....grammar, spelling, composition and punctuation. You need a BETA, especially if English is not your native language. Plus the first 4 chapters really need to be one or two chapters. However the plot/story line is a good one.

In my opinion I love what you have so far and I looking forward to the next part!!!

Wow

that was good can't wait to see what happens how rem and sir just gave harry up are did dumbly take him from them i also like that he has the founders blood him please update soon longer

This is an interesting story and i like how its going..... it has flaws. I'm meaning this to be constructive. I really am. First of all you need a beta. Not a bad thing. i think all writers should use a beta. Hell I use a beta.... If I didn't I'm sure I would have people hunting me down. second please add a little more descriptions. I know some peoples writing styles just aren't like that however it helps draw out the length of chapters and as a result the story.
Please don't get discouraged i really do like this story. please let me know if you are having trouble finding a beta. you can contact me at (kitsune_spyk@yahoo.com). good luck with the rest of the story i look forward to reading it.